The Traveler from the Deep !T1e/DmU8Jg 2008/10/15 (Wed) 16:52 No. 11724 ▼ File 122411473076.jpg - (95.70KB, 735x900 , Koishi2.jpg)
I came from the deep.
Ages ago, I stood on the tops of the mountains and looked down at the animals crawling in the dust. They were ugly. Some raised their eyes to the sky, knowing that I saw their ugliness, and screamed, though I said not a word. On the tops of the worlds, away from my home, I was alone.
I wished to walk among the people, so I leapt from the mountaintop and fell through their beautiful hideousness.
I watched them pass me as I fell upwards, to where they could not go.
Above the sky I found my own reflection, as though in a mirror, and the reflections of all the animals I had seen from the peak. I touched the mirror, and it shattered, spiderwebbing cracks and distorting the reflections to a completely different set of beings. They never noticed they had changed.
I flew among the realms beyond the earth, but no one looked into the air, not even those who were already in it.
As I flew, I found a marketplace without equal, filled with numerous crawling things. I remembered the cat that used to sleep on my bed, and how she played with such small animals.
It looked like fun, so I reached out into the mass and touched one...
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Second verse, same as the first, could get better or it might get worse. Come up with someone for our narrator to, ah, play with, and something for her to do. Slightly different this time around, though. Anyone around general /border/ territory is fair game, but all responses must be in language the narrator can understand - which is to say, bizarre and cryptic with any hints of reality elegantly twisted into metaphor. See the prologue of the /sdm/ thread if you're unsure. I'll probably leave this up for a day or two (or until I can and feel like writing it) and then pick the most interesting response. You needn't bother "voting" options after their initial submission, although expressing approval is fine. Be creative, put your own insane spin on things. Cheers.
PaperBoy !SxoPbZA6yI 2008/10/15 (Wed) 17:50 No. 11725 Awesome, I can already feel the despair.
[X] Wispy Willow, a stranger, a wisened being. Death a symbol, a bounded freedom, old and young, a lonely soul left wandering stagnantly.
Just putting something up here.
Anonymous 2008/10/15 (Wed) 18:13 No. 11728 [x] There's a lone hermit that flew away, leaving his only daughter astray.
[x] For many years he has been gone, but now I'll bring him back to his spawn.
Corrupt this. I DARE YOU.
Anonymous 2008/10/15 (Wed) 18:21 No. 11731 [X] This girl bears the burden of separation. Away her father flew, and her body split in two.
-[X] You can break her bones, but can you break her spirit?
Anonymous 2008/10/15 (Wed) 19:01 No. 11738 [ ] Near the edge of the ribbon, a well-worn tool, tempered through time beneath the clouded sky.
[ ] A thing restrained, bound by the ribbon. A touch, a tug, the bow is undone.
Anonymous 2008/10/15 (Wed) 23:25 No. 11746 [x] A little white. No, too much white. Maybe only equal parts. There now, perfectly split.
[x] YOUR FORTUNE FOR TODAY: Devotion is 24/7. Cut loose for once.
Anonymous 2008/10/16 (Thu) 08:31 No. 11768 [X]A wayward soul, a free spirit caged by authority, given the key to its freedom, shall it stay in servitude, or roam the lands as wild as its nature should be?
Bro& !KTiM/L43HQ 2008/10/16 (Thu) 09:59 No. 11771 [X] A Judge. Tied to her duty and always messing with the little details. I think it is time she saw the bigger picture.
PaperBoy !SxoPbZA6yI 2008/10/17 (Fri) 02:57 No. 11816 Well, fine then, I guess a generic expression of an action could work for all three...
Add this to my previous vote
[X] Time flows with ceased activity, and it is now a fair minute to bring changes to the paused.
Anonymous 2008/10/22 (Wed) 22:49 No. 12003 [x] I saw a lonely, miserable thing. A static fixture.
[x] But not if I can help it. I think I'm going to pull some strings, and let it see life once more.
Anonymous 2008/10/23 (Thu) 08:03 No. 12026 [x] I saw a pillar, worn with time.
[x] It still stands firm, but with age its surface is cracked and eroded. And with a gentle push, I'll make it crumble.