>>12010 >>12012 Well, thanks for pointing that out...
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[] Arrange for an early trip to Gensokyo with Aya, but try to keep Maribel and Renko out of it. While Yukari didn’t explicitly state that you shouldn’t tell anyone about your visits, you wouldn’t want to betray her trust.
“Sure, Aya, you’re welcome to come with us anytime!” Maribel finally says, clutching her books to her chest. “I really didn’t know you were so…er…passionate about the mysteries of Gensokyo too.” She comments finally.
“Thank you…really” Aya states firmly, leaving you no doubt that Aya does erroneously believe that Maribel knows how to consciously enter Gensokyo. With no option left, you decide to intervene before Aya’s high hopes are dashed on one of Maribel’s wild goose chases through the wildernesses.
While you do not doubt that Maribel has penetrated the Gensokyo border on several occasions, she has never done it consciously, catching only fleeting snatches of vision and sound from the land beyond. The way Yukari explained it, the border simply repulsed those who actively sought it out. Exceptions happen, and occasionally, at places where the boundary was stretched thin, or when a person was unusually attenuated, (Maribel’s case), partial entry would be possible.
Still, you wait till the party disperses and under the pretense of heading in the same general direction, you bid Maribel goodbye and go along with Aya as she treks back to her dwelling. For the first time in the entire day, you are truly alone with the girl, and are free to talk without the intrusive obstacle that Maribel presents.
“Aya,” you begin.
“Hmm?” she acknowledges, still strolling, obviously in no hurry for anything.
“I’m just going to clarify something with you.” you say, pacing alongside her.
“Sure.” Aya agrees, “What do you need to know? I’m in the mood for talking, so I can chat for a bit, as long as it doesn’t concern anything too private.”
“Good, I’ll get to the point.” You say, preparing yourself for a possible bad reaction. “You’re not from some remote mountain town, nor are you here for any purpose other than sheer accident.” You confront the raven haired girl. “You’re name isn’t “Hirano”, and you most definitely don’t have a blog! And that’s because, you’re from Gensokyo, aren’t you Aya?” you finish, noting the expression on her face.
“How…do you know?” she asks, backing away now, expression wary.
“Let’s just say that I have connections to Gensokyo and you may need my help to get back.” You say levelly, unwilling as of yet to divulge the extent of your relationship with Yukari. Knowledge that the two of you are acquainted would suffice for this situation.
“How can I trust you?” Aya says. While she has overcome her shock to a degree, she still appears guarded against you. “I just met you today.” she states.
“You just met Maribel the other day, “you point out, provoking a glare. “But I will prove that I do have a genuine link to Gensokyo, and can help you get back.”
“Say it.” She challenges.
You take a big breath and begin. “Yukari, Ran, Chen, Reimu, Akyu, Rinnosuke…” speaking unhesitatingly, you rattle on the names of everyone you’ve met in Gensokyo during your visits. “…Marisa, Tokiko and Cirno!” you finish, slightly out of breath. “Recognize any of them?” While you probably haven’t met everyone in Gensokyo, you are sure that Aya does recognize some of the names you mention.
”You…you…I must be going mad…” Aya sighs dejectedly. “Now, two of my friends have blurted out that they know about Gensokyo in a day. Who do I trust? I must be mad…because I want to trust the both of you.”
“We both really want to help.” You correct. “Though Maribel’s help might not be as effective as you think.” Quickly, you explain the circumstances, about Maribel’s intriguing affinity for the Hakurei barrier and your reasons why you feel that Maribel is best kept away from Gensokyo, for now at least.
Aya eventually assents to your offer, and you begin to lay your plans. By meticulous planning, or by plain good fortune, you happen to choose your day to set out on the department store’s Annual year end sale, largely eliminating Maribel and Renko from the scenario.
Early in the morning, you made your way through the sleeping township, all the way to the department store, where you clambered up the fire escape unenthusiastically, and cursing Aya’s abnormal choice of dwelling.
You clamber of the last chest high barricade, just as the sun peeks over the horizon, illuminating a veritable sea of crows. The murder of crows surrounded a crudely constructed lean-to set up against the water tank, and you estimate that there were at least five hundred of the stinking birds.
The crows, disturbed by your presence, begin cawing and flapping their wings, raising a storm of feathers, as you pick your way through them, occasionally shoving one away with your foot and approach the lean-to. It is hard to see in the gloom, but you make out the distinct shape of a person inside a thick sleeping bag, which you take to be Aya. Reaching within, you displace the fattest crow you have ever seen from his roost atop the sleeping bag, grasp the fabric firmly, and shake Aya into the world of the conscious.
Thankfully, Aya is not a heavy sleeper and is quite amicable, despite being woken in such a way and your hurried pace as you lead her to the station. While your train hasn’t arrived yet, you won’t chance missing it, as it’s a two hour ride to Chuushin City station and a transfer to another train for a five hour ride to the outskirts.
There are some minor incidents, Aya never having seen a train before and such, but she remains calm, if excited about the journey and you don’t really have to worry too much about her, though she did mistake cough syrup for a beverage on one occasion, downing some of the sickly sweet suspension before you could stop her and pocket the bottle. “That was the worst drink I ever had,” she commented later.
Still, the ride to Chuushin City station is a pleasant one, if a little dull, as is the second train you get on. You’ve made the trip many times before, and have never really enjoyed the monotonous long journey. Aya on the other hand is utterly entranced by the view through the windows, of the city in the morning sun.
”This is all one big city huh? The world is so…big!” she says, and you think, that from a native of Gensokyo’s perspective, that sums it up quite nicely.
[] It’s boring. A part of you wants something exciting to happen.
[] Just chat with Aya all the way.
[] Go to sleep till you reach the last stop.
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I'll be out of bed soon and back to regular life, so I'll not be updating as often as these few days. Thanks for the encouragement and constructive criticism.