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[X] WAKE UP

She woke up to a pounding headache and a horrendous pain in her chest. Even with her eyes screwed shut, she could still make out a blinking light throbbing in perfect time with her head. Had she gathered a bajillion fireflies all at once or something? Didn’t matter, that was prob’ly what woke her up, so Wriggle hid her face in her arms, only to moan when that somehow made it worse. She briefly considered getting up to turn it off or shoe them away or whatever, but it’d probably stop if she waited long enough. The metal floor might be cold and uncomfortable, but it was less painful than getting up.

Wait. Metal? Dirt she could kinda understand, but what in winter’s name was she doing on metal? Where even was she? There’s no way she just passed out somewhere randomly, right?

Admittedly, it was the sort of thing that could happen to most youkai. Sake and post-incident parties were the sort of crap everyone did, and half of them would eventually wake up whining about hangovers and hunching over the nearest toilet. But not Wriggle Nightbug! She’d always tried her absolute best to avoid alcohol. Because she didn’t like the taste, definitely not because she was as lightweight as her beloved bugs! And if anyone ever saw otherwise, it was because Mystia gave her a dozillion drinks whenever she ate at her izyka- isekai- restaurant!

Just so that was clear. Besides, this couldn’t be a hangover, that should be a pain in her stomach, not her chest!

… unless it was a heart attack. You couldn’t get a heart attack from those fizzy blue drinks, right? Surely Mysty wouldn’t give her so many if that was the case! Reflexively she moved her hand up to touch her chest, and immediately yelped at the pain. It didn’t even have the decency to be the same sort of stabbing pain as her chest; her entire arm felt like pins and needles, and moving it burned.

Gingerly she lowered it back to the ground, trying to massage some feeling into it with her other hand. It helped a little, but her skin felt hot, like her arm had caught a fever or something! Just the l

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[X] Well, she did really want her arm back, and they promised it wouldn’t hurt…

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[X] Nuh-uh, no way! Wriggle wanted no part of that torture chamber, and they’d done more than enough testing now anyway!

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[X] Well, she did really want her arm back, and they promised it wouldn’t hurt…


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Author’s Note: Full disclosure, this is a crossover with the mobile gacha game Fire Emblem Heroes plus my fanfiction ideas for it. I’ll, of course, try to write this so you don’t need any prior knowledge and explain stuff as necessary, but do ask questions when you don’t understand something. It’s also my first CYOA, so… Let’s see how it goes, huh?



“Begin documentation. Eitri, the Eternal Sage speaking. Preparing soul transfer #3784. Standard operating procedure. The new vessel is male, adult, athletic. Brown hair, brown eyes, fair skin. Alias will be Will Thompson. Beginning after recording end. End documentation.”



“Begin documentation. Loki, the lovely trickster god speaking. Preparing soul transfer interruption prank #0001. Question: How angry will Eitri get when I mess with her experiment? Hypothesis: She will throw quite the fit. Materials: Eitri’s lab equipment, plus one vessel, […]

Sex:
[] Male
[] Female

Age:
[] Prepubescent
[] Adolescent
[] Adult

[…], alias… Well, I suppose I have no say in that… Procedure: While Eitri is unconscious, I will pause the soul transfer process, reprogram everything to put her in the wrong body, then drop her off in my little pet project world. Beginning after recording end. End documentation.”



Author’s Note: So, whenever I thought about starting a CYOA, I always ran into the problem of “Does my idea for this MC feel like it’s the audience’s or the author’s?” Now, of course it should be both, but my fear was that with me at the helm, it might feel like I’m either trying to make the MC so much the audience’s that there’s a choice every paragraph, or so much mine that it might as well not be a CYOA. I thought this might be a happy medium between the two: The MC has a preestablished personality, past, and goal, but you get to pick the appearance and actions to reach the goal. Also, in case it wasn’t clear, in addition to choosing the age and sex, you are also invited to create na

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Stop it guys, Koboshi is married to the rock.

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>>215433 such an insult to reduce lady mimar to her current physical appearance

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Status Report: Got the new glasses, but I still need to work back up to achieving the flow state. Next chapter will be out when it's out.


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[2] Stay focused! Lady Mima needs you to stay on task.
[10] Stop for a visit. You’ll make it quick…


Why would any of them miss me? I never really made an effort to connect with any of the other devils. Did I really misjudge things that bad? Your cheeks heat up with shame as you consider that uncomfortable possibility.

It feels like sacrilege to dwell on it at all, let alone for as long as you have been. But these were people you knew. Maybe not very well, but they were still acquaintances. You can’t let them continue thinking you had been permanently exorcised like Elis did. If they remember you, even slightly, then you owe it to them to clear things up, don’t you?

“Ten minutes,” you manage out after a long battle with your inner demons. “In and out. Just to let them know that I’m okay.”

A triumphant grin explodes across her face. With how suddenly her newfound vigor took hold, it’d be impossible to tell she was so sentimental seconds ago. “Glad to see there’s still a little bit of the girl I knew in there.”

Grimacing, your fingers dig deeper into the rope. Lady Mima surely understands. I’m just tying up loose ends before getting back on track. This is a necessary diversion.

She would understand that. Right?

The weightless rock suddenly feels very heavy in your arms.


Elis seriously wasn’t kidding when she said Vina had been expanded. What had once been an endless field of marble rubble, cracked pillars, and crumbling archways has been transformed into a veritable cityscape of weathered statues, dry fountains, and winding roads carved with elaborate patterns. All of it is in a state of deliberate decay, constructed to look ancient rather than actually be ancient, no doubt designed to impress foreigners with the illusion of a rich and storied past.

And, at the center of it all, still towering over the ruins as proudly as it had back then, stands the temple. There is no official name for it, or if there is, you’ve never known it as anything other than j

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[X] You’ve got better things to do.
Been there done that, didn't do nothin before won't do anything now. Lets get back to business and close out this particular distressing chapter of the day and find a fuckin manual already man we ate clay and drank purple stuff. This doesn't have to be the end of our relationship with everyone, us laying out our thoughts and feelings can be the start of a different dynamic but right now we got shit to do and don't need to hang around anymore. Also as well intentioned as it was Elis was lowkey kinda tryna to convert us at the end again a lil and we already know we don't need that. Lets go get the doodly doo already

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[X] You’ve got better things to do. Check out the temple’s library, you’ll surely be able to parse the Hakurei scroll if you cross reference it against the many texts within.

Ugh. The whole situation feels familiar to me. Fuck this shit, time to do literally anything else.

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[X] You’ve got better things to do. Check out the temple’s library, you’ll surely be able to parse the Hakurei scroll if you cross reference it against the many texts within.
-[X] "Sorry, but no. I'd like to be alone for a while, so I can clear my head."


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Eternal has been bugging me to crosspost this here, and since I'm getting close to finish editing the second and third chapter I've complied. Be warned, this is a JJK crossover.
In 2007 stories of spiriting away have been passed down around an isolated Japanese village. In that village, two girls have been wrongfully identified as the culprits behind the recent uptick in disappearances.
This is their story. (Cirno and Dai take the place of the Hasaba sisters)



August, 2007

"Cirno." Daiyousei muttered, hugging her sister closer to her.

Cirno and Daiyousei Hibana huddled close within their stone cell with its iron bars, their blue and green hair intermixing. They had broken through the wood one on their first day, but the guard outside had caught them. It just made everyone else angrier and Daiyousei hadn't been able to fight back when Cirno was out cold. There had been disappearances happening since either of them could remember, people who were called uncles, aunts, and grandparents despite only having a vague relation to the community. Their mama, who Daiyousei couldn't remember the face of. She didn't know if their mama's disappearance was why everyone hated them, she didn't know what they had done wrong. They'd never made anyone disappear like mama had! They didn't do it, someone else was taking people! It made her tear up just thinking about How could they be responsible? Just because Cirno knew what 'Jujutsu Sorcery' was, didn't mean she did anything wrong. Cirno was her big sister, and a part of Daiyousei believed that if they just treated her nicely then they could all get along.

"It's okay, Dai, just follow my lead. You remember what I taught you?"

She nodded, muttering under her breath as she shook. "Take a deep breath, feel the cursed energy, take it into your gut, breathe out, feel it move through you, wrap your body in a shell of cursed energy, circulate it through your brain, and activate your technique."

She nodded, following her elder twin sister's command, remembering the days when they had first s

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I told you the next one would be out soon, next chapter is probably on the 5th



Daiyousei woke slowly, her eyelids fluttering open, her vision blurry. She mumbles something to herself, feeling strangely warm, and there was a bump sensation as well, like she was moving, but she knew she wasn't walking. Daiyousei shook her head. The last thing she remembered, she and Cirno had–

"Cirno!"

Daiyosei looked around, her head going left and right until she saw her bandaged sister beside her.

"Be careful." A strong unfamiliar voice cut in, dispelling Daiyousei's confusion. "She's still hurt, you shouldn't move her unless it's absolutely necessary."

Daiyousei nodded as her surroundings came into view. The man who was talking to her was the same blonde one who had saved her and Cirno, a moment later she remembered his name was Nanami. She looked around, and shifted in her seat uncomfortably. They were in a car, she had never ridden in one before, only seen them in pictures and on the village's television. She grabbed the seat belt, running a hand across it, she shuddered, thinking of the cage. Daiyousei resisted the urge to take it off as she looked at Cirno's bandaged form.

Her elder twin sister was out cold, her blue hair shielding her eyes and falling against the car door as sur curled in on herself as a series of bandages seeped in red wrapped around her chest. Out her own window, she could see mountains and hills rushing by, an endless canopy of trees under a blanket of night cut through by the car and its headlights on the desolate road. Daiyousei looked back to the front seat, and realized there had been someone, another man, sitting next to Nanami.

"Excuse me, Mister Nanami?"

"Your sister will be fine." He said, not turning to look back at them.

Daiyousei nodded, but before she could ask another question the man next to her seemed to cough into his hand. "Ahem, Nanami."

The student scowled at the aid for a moment, his face twisting with displeasure and venom died on his tongue, before looking back at Daiyousei and sighing. "I

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"Ahh, looks like it's getting a bit early." Mystia slouched into her gaming chair, smiling to herself as pursued guild chat and had her undead warrior run in a circle. After the girls had gone to sleep she had booted up her new favorite internet addiction, an American game a friend had introduced to her before leaving Japan.

Speaking of that friend, Mystia moused over a private message from her.

>'Mystia, are you okay?'

>'Why wouldn't I be? I've been online all night?'

>'You didn't hear anything?'

>'Any what?'

>'You know, explosions or something???!!!?"
>'There was a terrorist attack in Tokyo! I can't believe you didn't notice?!'
> 'CGR is already absent because his work place got bombed!'

'Is that what that was?' Mysita rolled her chair over to her window, opening the curtains and peeking through the blinds. Outside, a red and grey haze has conquered the skyline of Tokyo. Her wings fluttered, maybe she shouldn't listen to music while gaming anymore? She hopped out of her chair and opened her door a crack, peeping at the two young girls; still peacefully asleep.

She sighed. They couldn't pay off their debt to her if they were dead after all. Although the mention of CGR's work place getting bombed did make her worry, she was pretty sure he was already a big <i>aged</i> by the standards of humans.

>'Mystia?'
>'Msty?'
>'MSITY?!'
>'Are you okay?'

>'Just checking on something'
>'I got some house guests recently'

>'Humans?'

>'Not like I know ma

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[-] Medical treatment received.

"That's the last one," Reisen said softly, tying off the final bandage. "How are you feeling?"

Sitting listlessly on the gap, you looked down at the results. Your injured tails outnumbered the healthy ones, with no fewer than five wrapped up in makeshift casts. The pride and joy of any kitsune, the mark of their power and experience... well, they certainly marked something, alright.

How did it go this wrong? How?

"Ran? Is there any pain?"

You wrenched your eyes shut, barely holding back the dam of tears. It wasn’t like despair was anything new to you. In fact, it was a foundational experience - your current life as a shikigami began amidst the shattered remnants of your past self’s life, leaving your early days swamped by the emotion… and despite your progress in both control and stability, you could never truly seem to leave it behind. Sooner or later, no matter what tactics you tried or how promising your efforts seemed, you’d find yourself here.

Useless.

A hand gently pressed against your forehead, and you sucked in the breath at the unexpected touch. "There's no fever, at least."

You blinked, realizing the moon rabbit was watching you with open concern... and then her question from before finally registered. You blinked a few more times, focusing until Reisen's face came into view.

"Sorry. Can't feel the breaks, they just ache a little. Painkillers must be kicking in." And definitely not any other reason for your mind to be in tatters.

Reisen nodded, her red eyes leaving gleaming afterimages. "Could you rate it on a scale from one to ten?"

You reached for the glass of water, taking a drink as you marshalled your thoughts. "My tails are all between zero and three. Can't feel those two at all." You pointed in the vague direction of the ones most thoroughly wrapped up. "Main body... call it a four. Six if I move the wrong way."

Your nurse gave you a sharp nod, pulling out a small container of pills. "In that case, some painkillers are in order. I used a light

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Yeah this part really had to juggle everything else happening that Greg and Sumireko weren't seeing. How the incident was affecting gensokyo, what everyone that's relevant has been doing and their roles, as well as probably the most complex main character we've gotten.

I have to give you your flowers, you did a fantastic job in writing all these things and making me care about some previously one-note minor antagonists. None of the characters you've expanded on feel uninteresting or poorly written to me. Ran is my 2nd favorite character in this story, just so sad and fun and heartwarming to watch at different times. And the greater scheme of the incident still feels consistent with what's happened throughout the story; doesn't feel like there's major inconsistencies or retcons, and still managing to open up a myriad of possibilities for the future.

You've more than earned the break!

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have a nice break. i await the next

[X] Alice.

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As someone who decided to read the entire story, I think that this is peak material. Appreciate the story very much.


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3 AM. The Witching Hour.

A time during which the boundary between normalcy and the profane is at its weakest, when safety’s veil over mankind thins to gossamer and allows fear to seep through. Winds start to carry whispers, and the creaks of one’s home bring with them thoughts of unseen presences. At that hour, all that lurk in the darkness are at their most terrifying.

That’s the belief, anyway - one reinforced by generations of sleepless nights. And in Gensokyo, belief is a force of nature in and of itself. Surely then, at this very moment, you must be at your peak. Surely.

Despite your effort to steel your revolve, your breath shivers past your lips. The pressure in your chest is no less oppressive than it was moments ago. If anything, it only mounts further. But you have to be strong, now more than ever. Frightening as it may be to take the first step, you have to do this. For her.

Forcing yourself forward, your foot steps past the torii gate of the Hakurei Shrine. You’re trespassing on sacred ground now. The pressure in your chest doubles, a palpable weight that threatens to buckle your knees. But the night makes you strong. The next step is easier to take, and the step after that even more so.

It gets so much easier to keep pushing onward, in fact, that by the time you’ve made it halfway down the leaf laden walkway, you’re starting to feel rather light and jumpy instead of leadfooted. The fear of getting caught skulking around is a great motivator to hurry up, as it turns out. And so, you skedaddle around the building in your desperate search for her.

Due to the special link you two share, you find yourself naturally drawn toward a grove of cherry trees a short distance from the back of the shrine. You bypass the main shrine grounds entirely, feet guided by an invisible connection. There, half-buried in a layer of pink petals from spring’s end, your gaze settles on a large stone - a paper talisman stuck to its surface. A seal. The seal that contains your master.

The sight is almost enough to bring you to your knees. Couldn’t the Hakurei have thought of

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>>215343
Sure, here you go

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KOBOSHI'S HIT THE BUMP LIMIT!!!
NEW THREAD TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!

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The adventures of our girlfailure continue in the NEXT THREAD: https://www.thp.moe/th/res/215370.html

Our total word count for thread 1 was 43,725, with an average of ~2.6k words per update. Not bad, if I say so myself, though some were certainly wordier than others :P

Koboshi sure has come a long way since prowling around a shrine at the witching hour, hasn't she? Hopefully she can learn to stop beating herself up soon.


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Reimu panted and held her side, feeling the burn from one of the lasers which had grazed her. Her red hakama were covered in grey ash, and her white kimono was speckled with soot, dirt, and a little blood. She half-crouched, half-knelt on Genji’s back, the giant turtle having shrugged off most of the attacks that had hit him.

Still, she took some satisfaction from being in a better state than her opponent. The one she was fighting was a gargantuan woman, one who simply radiated power. Even so, it was clear that she had suffered; white hair cascading in front of her face, red dress covered in soot and one purple wing bent unnaturally and another bearing an angry-looking tear in it. The remaining four wings

“Looks like your bark is worse than your bite!” Reimu powered through the pain and gave the goddess a savage grin.

“How could you be this strong?” The goddess panted out, shocked at her defeat

“Well, that’s just normal for me” Reimu boasted, puffing her chest out.

Shinki just gave her an unamused look, before brushing the hair out of her face “Anyway, what business did you have in Makai again”

Now it was Reimu’s turn to give an unamused look “Like I’ve been saying! There’s been too many demons coming to the human world lately! You’re the god of their world, so do something about it!”

“Guess I’ve got no choice...”
Shinki grumbled, before raising a hand to her chest. A purple light washed over the goddess, causing her to be rejuvenated. Her Wings snapped back into place, the gash disappearing in an instant. Even her clothes began to sew themselves back together.

Then she raised a hand towards Reimu, wreathed in green light. Reimu was about to get Genji to dodge when the light poured over her. She could feel the pain in her side dissipate, as the wounds across her body closed.

Shinki gave her a slight curtsy, her six wings disappearing as she did so.

“In deference to that strength of yours, I shall do something about it.” she declared.

“Yes, Please do.” Reimu put her hands on her waist, like her mom did when scolding her. She wasn’t entirely sure what def-fer-ence meant, but it sounded like she

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...oh. I thought we were going to have a sudden loss of Haru and we were just seeing death flags popping up and all the talk of her death was her knowing she wouldn't survive the next fight with hostile youkai sometime in the undetermined future point.

But whatever is going to kill her has already happened and she's just waiting for it to reach fruition that they seem to onow the end date of and is dealing with making sure Reimu is taken care of and ready while she still can...

Or i might be reading a bit too into it... it doesn't... quite sound like its going to be death... At least not as a direct result of whatever process has already begun?

But if that's the case... Is she going yo end up a feral youkai that would be dangerous to the barrier? And thus either they will be ready to deal with that. Or make sure ut doesn't get to that point? (Probably not with Reimu having good relations... For her grumpy self anyway. Afterwards...

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Rinnosuke sat calmly, equipped with a needle and thread. He wove blue threads together, repairing an old kimono which had suffered some tears. He cast an eye to the side, seeing a much less certain seamstress. Marisa grit her teeth in focus, attempting to mend a hole in her purple dress, suffered courtesy of Mima. However, once more, she exerted too much force, pricking her finger again and yelling in pain.

Rinnosuke put down his needle with a muted sigh.

“Kourin, I’m bleedin’!” Marisa exclaimed. “How am I gonna recover if I keep getting injured?” She asked dramatically.

The wound was a tiny pinprick, of course. It would heal within a day.

Rinnosuke let the girl peter out of complaints in her own time before speaking.



“Marisa, this is not a fight. You don’t have to use the needle so forcefully.”



The young witch pouted. “But, if I don’t hold onto it, then I’m just gonna drop it. An’ I need to use enough strength to actually get through the clothes” she pointed out.



Rinnosuke shook his head gently. “it’s certainly true that you need to pierce through. But you should let the needle do most of the work. It’s specifically made to do that, after all.” He said dryly.



With a gesture of the head, Marisa moved over a little, letting him sit next to her. “Here, like this” The man said, threading the needle and moving Marisa’s fingers onto it. “Now hold onto the clothe, and weave through” he said, going through the motion with her. One weave became two. Two became three. Three became ten, and ten became twenty. She was in a good rhythm- until she got too hasty, pushed through with too much force again and just barely avoided another pinprick.



Marisa grit her teeth, a quiet growl slipping from her. The half-youkai however, nodded in approval.



“That was well-done, Marisa.” he said, the warmth in his tone even surprising himself.



A shocked expression was Marisa’s answer to his praise.


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Haru Hakurei tucked her daughter into bed, leaving the girl with a last kiss to the forehead. Honestly, she would never have expected her little girl to get so worked up over sewing of all things, but she had consistently been visiting Marisa and Rinnosuke for the past fortnight over just that.

Haru soon found herself lying in her own bed. She closed her eyes, trying to get some rest.

But inside of her, she felt something stir. A chill, running through her soul itself. Recognising it as an attempt to possess her body, Haru flooded her body with energy, sufficient to exorcise any ghost or phantom trying their luck. But as she did so, she realised; whatever was trying to take over her body was doing so remotely.

But to take over a person’s body from far away, a youkai would need an incredibly high compatibility with their victim. ‘At that level of compatibility,’ she thought, ‘they would have to almost be-’
As Haru came to that realization, a wave of emotions crashed into her.

Anger, bitterness, desperation. Haru knew those emotions, but she controlled them. Even as they welled up within her chest, she controlled them, and didn't let them overcome her.

She remembered her times, with Keine, with Misumaru, Kasen and Yukari. Akyuu and Eiko, Kotoha and Azama, people she didn’t know as deeply. People she had trained with fight with, grown with. She remembered her mother, stern and dutiful, with Natsu, cheerful but resolute. She remembered her time with Reimu; her brilliant and kind girl. Her lazy and careless girl. Her pride and joy.

Even while weakened, she had the strength to resist any attempt at invasion, because of her own strength, and because of the strength she had borrowed from others. With that, the power trying to claim her body dispelled, leaving her in control of her own body, but left with a deep exhaustion.

And so, Haru Hakurei slipped into a deep, deep sleep.

But something else stirred, far away.



Reimu awoke, the sun hanging high in the sky. She groaned and rolled over. She was never a morning person, though she felt especially bad wakin

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You awake into this world with a scream.

Your eye flies open as your vision blurs. Panicking, you quickly stand up only for you to immediately fall over. You feel like you want to vomit.

So vomit you do, as you crawl over to a nearby tree and hold onto it for dear life as you puke whatever was inside your digestive system.

A few minutes pass as your show of repugnance slowly fizzles out. A sigh of relief passes over you as you move closer to the tree and plop yourself onto it for support.

You're breathing steadily now. Your eyes aren't blurry any longer and they adjust to the moon-lit night.

Looking around you realize you are in a forest, an ancient looking woodland to be more specific. The trees that surround your corpse (Did you just refer to ourself as a corpse?). Are old and- wait who said that?

(Me you fool, I am your conscience.)

That... Isn't normal. You think to yourself, one would think it impossible for your own conscience to have thoughts independent of your own, let alone have it's own voice.

(Well, something clearly happened before we woke up here. I don't remember much myself so I'm hoping you could fill me in.)

Ah right, your current predicament. You snap out of your thoughts and take another look at the forest around you.

You don't even know where you are. How does one even find themselves in a forest?

Like a quick clap of thunder however, you suddenly realize something.

Your breathing quickens in panic as it becomes increasingly obvious to you that you cannot recall a single thing before your awakening.

(Shit.)

You can't remember anything.

(Okay look I know this is a bad-)

You can't remember your life before waking up here.

(Let's just take a breather and coll-)

You can't even remember your own name.

(FOCUS.) Your conscience shouts.

(Look, we can't sit all day moping about the fact that we can't remember anything. Need I remind you we're in the middle of a forest?)

I guess you're right.

(Good, now get up and let's get out of here.)

With as much e

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Aaaaand now Marisa is wondering if there's a corpse in her house.

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>>215151
>You don't look like one ze~
>this will only take a moment ze~
Why don't you start writing dialogue replicas in Japanese then? You know, to be consistent.

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glad to see this one come back
voice-in-the-back-of-our-head san is my favourite of the four characters introduced


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THE STORY SO FAR:
The world has ended, but five (well, it’s complicated) humans get a chance to do it over, and make things right. Only problem is, for their second go around, they're not going to be 'human'...

Kosuzu, Reimu, Akyuu and Youmu have all remembered their pasts, and through significant trials and tribulations, begun the path of fighting against the doomed future. Of the five Immaterial Children who were wound back in time together, only one’s fate remains unknown - the former magician, Kirisame Marisa.

In this life, she is Houjuu Marisa, raised on the island of Sado in the outside world. Spending her childhood years looking up at the stars, the arrival of the Spiral Comet awoke her inhuman heritage - one she was completely unaware of, and equally unprepared to deal with. Having fled her life on the island, she now searches for a way to get to Gensokyo, ever chased by a mysterious group.

She is not the only one exploring the mysteries of the city she now finds herself in - she is joined by Goutokuji Mike, a young maneki-neko of the modern world also on the run from home. Together, they discovered the Lunar Rainbow Market, and with the assistance of powerful benefactors managed to evade their pursuers.

Their time at the Scarlet Talent Agency ended poorly, yet not fruitlessly - not only were they joined by fellow mystery-hunter Kotohime, but a mysterious shadow of a witch managed to contact the young Houjuu, and point her on the path towards discovering her nature and purpose. This has proven to be another pain point for Mike, who feels herself falling behind the young changeling and wants to catch up. Perhaps the Vanishing Path and the prisoner of the shrine it conceals will give her a chance to prove herself…

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Please wait.
Writing "update where?" doesn't make it go faster.
While you wait, have a Kosuzu.

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He's busy with the reward stories for the contest, he's said as much on discord.

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New reader here. I've been really liking this story, and I wanted to talk about some of my thoughts about it. This is from the perspective of someone who isn't that familiar with Touhou canon and mostly read through on AO3, so hopefully I didn't miss too much context from canon and/or the threads.


The Immaterial Children had to go through a big change to get the power to overcome the oncoming threat, but it's not just the Immaterial Children who need to change.

Characters in this story often end up in situations - often *put themselves in* situations, even - where the behaviors they've grown used to no longer serve them. Where things would not be so dire if only the character had not done a thing they did out of unexamined habit. And one thing I find really satisfying is when a character recognizes the pattern.

They finally see it clearly. They didn't make an isolated slip. They did their usual thing, something they've done before and would have done again, and it cost them. And when they realize this, that's a big moment of growth. That's when they have the understanding and motivation to make a change.

I think this is especially prominent in arc 4. For all of Kosuzu's worry about ruining things for her allies, and for all of Tsukasa's efforts, it's ultimately Keiki and Yachie who screw themselves over harder than anyone else can. In the same arc, we also see the haniwa army's complacency, and we see Yukari realize that her own exploitable habits led her to hide the evidence that could have saved Kosuzu years ago. By the end of it, I think they've all learned something. I think the moment that stuck with me the most is seeing Keiki realize, "Oh shit! That's not just some army getting butchered out there. That's most of my loved ones!"


And on the other side of things, we see characters like Saki who haven't learned. Man, Saki. Once she has Seiga's buff up, she's in her element. Tearing through her enemies, hitting strategic targets in a really effective way... she might have even identified the haniwa production facility herself. She's reveling, but she's al

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[x] Reisen is a brilliant little kit, and this was the time for her to shine. Just like with Chen, all I needed to do was give her a little support and encouragement.

I still remember back when Chen made her first spellcard. It had taken a lot of effort on both our parts - for all her good qualities, Chen simply wasn’t a natural with danmaku. Staying still while you cast a spellcard and the other person shot at you went against every instinct my kit had, and while spellcards with movement did exist, they were more difficult for a beginner. Making matters worse, the order for me to treat her as my pet made it difficult for me to teach her to the degree I wanted. (When she grew frustrated and started mewling for kitty cuddles, I almost had to tie my own hands to stop the shikigami from indulging her.)

But nevertheless we persisted, and finally she had her first spellcard ready to show Yukari. And my little girl was nervous. The shikigami possessing me had been anxious that everything be perfect for its master, and while that drive had helped in focusing enough to teach Chen… it had left my kit with stage fright, her voice wavering as she asked if we could maybe practice another week first.

I’d felt an almost primal urge to just embrace her and make the problem go away. To pick up my little girl, hug her, assure her she was the best kitten in all of history, and leave the spellcard demonstration for later. But that would have just delayed the problem and made it that little bit harder for Chen to stand on her own when “later” finally came. She’d done a good job, she’d put in the work, and “Kishin - Soaring Bishamonten” was a fine entry-level spellcard. As much as I wanted to hold her hand, that would be holding her back. She didn’t need my protection… just a little encouragement.

So I knelt down, and pet her. A quick stroke as my fingers traced a line from her fluffy ears down her cheek. She went completely still, looking at me as I told her not to worry. That she was ready, that she’d worked hard, and that Yukari was going to be just as impressed with her as I was. And in my kit’s eyes I saw the worry fade away as Chen fought her fear with pure, earnest determi

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It would be really funny if after all the bonding and trauma Greg and Satori have been through together, seeing Greg as a fox is what gets Satori to fold and get with Greg

After reading the little blurb from snippets about physical contact, I think it'd be really funny to see Ran trying to seduce Matthew and continuously being outdone by him unintentionally

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New thing I've been thinking about: of the 3 possible powers Greg presented for the Jesus urban legend, I'm guessing the third (casting out demons) is probably Yuyuko's goal for Youmu or Greg(or possibly even Greg's dad).

Considering the specification on demons that possess people, it would be the best option to kick Tamamo out of Yukari's body and might be able to kick out the Shikigami spirit from Ran, which as I understand the shikigami spell would effectively release Ran. It could even cast out urban legends, which would be an instant fix for Remilia and get over a hurdle for Koishi.

Resurrection could also fit thematically for Greg or his pop pops, seeing as how all but like maybe 3 people think they're dead, and that could lead to an "awakening" of sorts for Greg's youkai nature. It might also affect Youmu, turning her into a full human for all that entails.

The healing power meanwhile doesn't really fit onto Greg or Youmu though. Maybe for Greg's dad. For Greg in particular, he's made his mark trying to keep people out of bad situations or making the best of them, not healing them(for his childhood trauma, he was the one being healed by Sumireko, not the healer).

I'm mainly considering Greg, Greg's dad and Youmu as the candidates here because they're the only ones to have ties to Christianity at present(and Ran, but I doubt the everyday villagers know about that).

This is also much less likely, but as I was reading the story I briefly theorized that Greg might get the literal antichrist as an urban legend as some sort of possible bad end; fox features might count as a "mark of the beast" and he simultaneously divided and united his class as a kid (like the antichrist is said to do to Israel)(I think)(I don't know that much abrahamic lore).

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New thread is up. Sorry for the delay on this one. >>215157


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